Click for huge. I haven't blacked in the lace on the dress,but that's a whole fkn thing and it's my bedtime, so whatevs.
That is all for now. I'll see you on Saturday for a chapter update. I've been struggling with this one, because Chapter 11 (Journey to Salinas) is forked in three different directions for most of it, and there are plot points from each of them that I want to include, which makes it way too long. But if Chapter 11 is split into two, then Chapter 12 (Over the Sands and Along the Coast) becomes Chapter 13 (Hope's End), and Chapter 13 is supposed to be when Pannych dies. So... uhh... I mean, that was just a happy numerological coincidence, and I'm willing to let it go. But I spent way too long staring at the screen and trying to decide. I'm decided now, though, and Pannych dies in Chapter 14 now. Oh, well. Maybe I'll smash together a couple chapters earlier on when it's committed to paper. We'll see. Cheers!


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